Monday, April 10, 2006

1020 response for week of April 10

Post by 5pm Friday.

Write 2-3 paragraphs that detail your revision plan for your paper and that address the following:

What kinds of comments have you gotten on the paper this week and how are you using these and your own ideas to revise?

Write about the purpose (what is it that you want to get across in the paper and how are you doing that?) of the paper and who you imagine the audience to be. Are you meeting this purpose in the paper? Explain how you are working on clarifying your ideas, and maybe your overall focus, to more clearly meet the purpose and address the audience for this essay.

Do you need to include more or better sources? Are there places in the text that require further explanation, or better summarizing or citation of the sources you are using? Explain.

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